This morning Rob was a tad hyper and whilst I was writing a blog post for our cats he asked me to write down a poem and publish it. Now my fiancé isn’t the poetry type, and in all honesty he was completely taking the piss. This entire poem was spoken out loud to me whilst I typed within a minute or so, so lower your expectations, a little more, a tad more, okay that should do it.

Within the Realms

by Robert Brammer

I’ll try, he said

I’ll try to be better

The words fall from his mouth

like pennies in a well

all the while standing

repeating the same actions

I stare at him

Hope does glisten from his eyes

We’ll see


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